This is an afternoons work smushed up into twenty seconds. The two scenes I have animated today look 'OK'. But they could have been so much better. I think the layout is an issue...I'm no good at planning scenes even though I have spent so, so much time trying to learn how.
The good thing is that nothing is set in stone. I am draughting up a working version and then going back and improving anything that I can...that might even mean redrawing entire scenes if necessary.